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[The Memory]

Acoustic part FTW

Hot damn!

That acoustic part was off the wall!!!! I NEED as in MUST HAVE OR WILL DIE tabs for the acoustic part. It blew me away. Please send me a PM. I'll do anything in return...anything lol. I w2ant those tabs. PLEASE!!!! I didn't care much for the electric though, but that acoustic was some hot stuff. Keep it up and flowing. 5/5_10/10 no questions asked.

ConnieB responds:

thanks man
the only reason i didnt stay acoustic the whole time is, 2 reasons...1: it'd get WAY too repetative or annoying in all acoustic, trust me, ive tried it. and 2: i love to rock, so i had to make it angrier ha
besides, the song'd about being mad at yourself for losing what you loved(the memory(of a girl?)) not that ive expericed this lmao, i HATE my ex, haha

[Flight of Birds]

not to shabby!

hey there!

There where a few sour notes but I gave you a 4/5. You are really good, I can tell. I like what I hear, for sure. Could use a better build/chorus though. Or atleast some chords in there. I think that would help it, besides the occasional strum you did here and there. Keep it up though ;)

GlavinThryash responds:

Thanks for the advice! It is much appreciated! I know what you mean, the strings I have been using are quite old and at times get a bit difficult to press all the way down creating the fuzzed notes :)

[Opeth]

Perfect Cover

You need a midid box there bud. So you can plug in direct without a mic, no sounds diturb the recording but the guitar itself. I have an M-Adio and it works fine. Only 99.99 ask for one for the holidays ;)

Anyway your getting better and better. This finger picking or whatever your doing is great, perfect. Keep it up. Flawless besides that buzzing haha.

PantomineX responds:

Heh, thanks man. I'll have to look into that.

[The End of a Path]

Getting Better!!!

lol it's me again!!!!

Your strumming is spot on here but...your doing something else that is a pet peve of mine haha. Your hitting strings in the chords that really should not be hit. For example on the really high note chord with the high e string your keep hitting the D string I believe, open as well. it throws off the entire chord and kills that raw sound you where going for and just makes you sound like you don't know what your doing to be honest. Oh, as of writing the track was playing....and at the very start of the high pitched chord you have it perfect, then it goes heywire lol.

Overall there is great potential in these CHORDS, but not in the key your playing in. Try mixing around a little and maybe throw in a d minor like "EM9 Diminished" instead of that high chord to make a haunting sound. Anyway keep practicing, you've got potential buddy ;)

5/5_9/10

PantomineX responds:

I'll re-record it some day when I have some cheap equipment. Remove some parts, and stuff.

[Scarlet]

Great into, Strumming needs work

Hey,

Great intro and build/pre chorus, but buddy your strumming needs some work. It's very jagged and un easy. Also your strings are buzzing quite a bit. Try pressing harder on them. I get the feeling you are new to guitar or you where really tired when recording lol. Either way I would love to see a revamped version of this.

Also could you PM me with the tuning and the TABs for the intro/Verse? (I've been playing for three and 1/2 years by the way) Or post them if you want. OR don't give them at all haha whatever. I want to play this though and I'm to lazy to "Play it by ear" (No pun intended) Anyway keep it up and keep impressing your lady friends!!!!!!

Overall:

4/5_8/10

;)

PantomineX responds:

I don't really feel comfortable with the strumming either. It was my first recording (second one submitted), so I really didn't understand what the mike's settings were. I'll re-record this one VERY soon as I have been introduced to my great friend, Audacity.